VA201 (Brendan - Nov 2023) - Session 2
Cheryl (Sherirun) for Role
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
This has a nice, informative tone! Sure the script had all caps, but there was no direction on HOW to deliver it, so I think your take on it is great!
Thank you Kwaken for the kind comment! I appreciate it!
A clear and concise read! I did take the all caps as an indication that the read should be fairly energetic, but the way you read it sounds great, too!
Thank you for your kind words, Jackie!! I appreciate the comment!
Nice clear tone, Sherirun! I could hear your smile in your voice! I would find ways to smile more. Find ways to bring the pace to be faster so it can fit into a 30 second commercial. Great job!
Thank you Brian for taking the time to listen and comment! I appreciate it! Upping the pace and adding more smiles sound good!
Ha, no many scrtips are all cpas and don't mean 200% ;) good thought tho! Nice smile sound and pace, very friendly and approachable. Still space to go in the connecting TO a listener as if they're right in front of you, but this one's intentionally hard for that balance. Nice.
Thank you for your kind feedback Brendan! I appreciate it!I'll take note of imagining the listener as if they're right in front of me!