Noting the length of your audio is important, and there's about 3 minutes of silence. Be mindful of word slurring, although it improves as the read progresses. To enhance your performance, try to inject a conversational and storytelling element into your delivery. Vary your pitch, tempo, and the length of pauses to create a more engaging and natural performance. This will make your script feel less like a read and more like a genuine conversation. Keep practicing and experimenting with these aspects to improve your delivery.