fantastic homework here - thank you for all the notes Kay - helps me a great deal. I find this is all a bit too slow is all. I love where your voice is sitting but the slow pace is taking it out of conversational - even though your voice is in a good place. So just a bit more pace in this and i think you'd have a winner here. Thanks for submitting either way my friend. Thanks for caring enough to do all this work as well - speaks VOLUMES to me. Also increase your levels - just too low