No worries still was a nice read, your delivery had a wonderful storytelling quality that felt like you were sharing a children's story with an audience. The pronunciation of the "PTD's" was pretty spot-on, which is a significant plus! You'll get better the more you read and familiarize yourself with different scripts. However, there were moments where you paused a bit too much, and this could affect the flow of the read and the audience's engagement. Your narration had a natural story progression, and it touched on various emotions, which is excellent. However, I'd suggest that the ending could have had a slightly happier tone with a more pronounced smile in your voice. Also, there was some background noise, possibly from typing on a keyboard, so be mindful of that in future recordings. Nothing to worry about for HW but just want to make you aware of it. Overall, these are relatively minor points in what was a pretty good read. Keep up the good work!