Wow, you nailed those /P/s, /T/s, and /D/s to the wall!!! I don’t think I was able to find a single instance where you dropped an end-position consonant or substituted one consonant for another. Kudos!

Incredible annunciation!

Your pronunciation of the “PTD” is good! But I feel that was the focus on the script. Which is good and fairly important. but in voice acting, it's equally crucial to maintain a conversational tone and engage the audience. Adding a smile and some physicality can indeed contribute to a more natural and engaging delivery. I like how you listed things, you managed to sound pretty conversational when it came to listing specifically how you said “peacocks and people” It's essential to bring that conversational, everyday feel to your reads, even when dealing with specific details. Keep working on balancing your focus on pronunciation with maintaining a friendly, conversational tone. It's all about finding that sweet spot between clarity and engaging delivery. Great job!