You definitely sound confident in what you're saying even through the little mistakes, great zombie noises too!

I like your energy and the upbeat sound of your voice. The zombie noises were awesome!

Great improvements from last week, I can tell that you had read the script quite a bit prior to hitting record. Consistent practice and familiarity with the script can indeed make a significant difference in your performance. Now, let's take it a step further. Adding physicality and a warm, genuine smile can inject more life into your voice acting. Imagine you're explaining something you absolutely love to a close friend—your enthusiasm and energy should shine through. I'm pleased that you enjoyed the zombie noise, but there's always room for more creativity and playfulness. Feel free to experiment with different tones, lengths, and levels of silliness to create a truly entertaining and engaging performance. Keep up the great work, and continue exploring ways to infuse more excitement and personality into your voice acting!