Thanks!! #1: Nice upper register use for a bit of size difference help. Nice settling into a powerful mid level. "Shreds" came out like Sheds to me. The end sounds feel a bit held back, understandable as they can be big/hard to do but in future Hw's for me I'd benefit from knowing what your FULL expression/volume can be. The peaking is quite noticeable already with your bigger works. Adjust gain either on your program or at the mic/interface where you have options for louder works.