Your energy and enthusiasm in the read are great, but it's essential to work on the pacing and variety in your delivery. Try to avoid getting into a repetitive pattern of energy and pitch. Instead, vary your tone, pitch, and pacing to keep the performance engaging and dynamic. Additionally, when performing a scene, it's crucial to establish who you are in the scene, who you're speaking to, and why you're saying these words. This context can greatly enhance the authenticity and impact of your performance. Lastly, pronunciation is key. Be sure to check the pronunciation of challenging words and names before recording to ensure accuracy and clarity. Keep practicing, and you'll continue to improve your voice acting skills!