You did a great job with the storytelling, creating an engaging atmosphere. However, it's essential to strike a balance between sticking to the script and adding personal flair. While adlibs can be fun, it's crucial not to overdo them to the point where they distract from the original meaning of the script. I also appreciate that you picked up on the twist in the story, where Robin, despite having rotting legs, managed to "walk" off the podium. This shows your attention to detail. When providing details, consider being more specific about the character, audience, and context. For instance, are you narrating this story to a group of friends who have heard it multiple times, or is it a new audience? Get even more specific for your world! Adding these layers can make your delivery more unique and engaging. Keep up the excellent work, and remember to balance creativity with the script's intent!