Omg I absolutely loved your performance on this! Your pacing is comfortable to listen and follow too!

You brought a great level of energy and enthusiasm to this read, which suits the character and the context of sharing an exciting experience. Your performance exuded positivity and genuine excitement, which is perfect for engaging an audience. However, there are a few areas to consider for improvement. Pacing and enunciation are crucial. While the energy was fantastic, some words and phrases were a bit challenging to follow due to rapid delivery. Being mindful of your pace and ensuring clear enunciation will make your delivery even more effective. The hesitation before "Rhuddlan" was a nice touch, adding a conversational and relatable element to the performance. It made the character feel more genuine and human. There could be moments where you fully embrace the excitement even more, especially towards the end. Don't hold back; allow your character to express their enthusiasm freely. In summary, you have a fun and engaging character, and your enthusiasm is a real asset. By paying attention to pacing, enunciation, and fully committing to the character's emotions, you can take your performance to an even higher level. Keep up the good work!