What a ton of energy! Nice job! Having a lot of energy for this really encaptures the sporty vibe and keeps the audience focused and wanting more. Your intonation is great and you spoke nice and clear. During the action parts of describing the plays, don’t be afraid to vary up the pitch in there. Imagine that you are right on the field with them as you’re describing it and use hand gestures to sort of mimic the scene and speed of the players. Other than playing with the pacing, you did very well with this, so awesome job!