Like the voice. *thumb up emoji* I think you mispronounced "Avignon." I'm giving you a pass on "Silvianis" cause I don't even know how to pronounce that.

I like the audience you chose for this! First, when we take into account that the audience is already bored, I’d like to hear you be even more animated in this as if the audience are going to be a very hard crowd to draw in before they switch off your channel. You did a nice job with your intonation and varying up the delivery but think of how you can change up the intensity levels and change the volume and pacing up in certain spots to leave the audience wanting more. Overall you have a great tone for this, so good job!