Your pacing is a bit slower, which can make the delivery sound like you're simply reading the script instead of actively engaging the audience. Pacing is crucial in voiceover work. If you speak too slowly, it can make the delivery feel monotonous and uninspiring. On the other hand, if you rush through the script, it might become challenging for the audience to follow, and you could run out of breath. To strike the right balance, consider the context of the script. In this case, you're in a gym filled with people, and you need to command their attention. Visualize yourself as an enthusiastic salesperson who genuinely believes in the products you're promoting. This mental imagery can help you adjust your pacing and tone to match the energetic atmosphere of the gym and convey the excitement necessary to engage your audience effectively.