Your voice was built for this! Very easily imagine that on an actual ad!

Good job on projection; that's the main thing we're looking for in this script. Your fun, strong voice really helps promote this item effectively. Now, one of the main things I'm noticing is your breath control. Keep up with your "doggy pants" and tongue twisters to help build up that breath support. These exercises are crucial for getting used to doing longer reads like this. "Doggy pants" and tongue twisters are excellent exercises to help build up your breath support and improve your overall vocal stamina. Practice these exercises regularly to help you feel more comfortable with longer reads. You're doing a really good job taking those diaphragmatic breaths and using a Reactive Breath to reset; this is a great habit to fall into. Remember that flubs will always happen, so don't let them shake your confidence. You're doing well overall. However, I think I would like to hear you throw in some more variety in your performance to make it stand out even more. Maybe speed up in one part and slow down in the next, or perhaps even throw in a small chuckle to convey that you're having a good time. It will add a dynamic touch to your delivery. Overall, very good job, a solid performance!