You're on the right track! However, let's focus on the setting for this script. It's essential to convey the feeling of speaking in a gym full of people without a microphone. Imagine you're addressing this crowd and project your voice accordingly. We want to hear the passion in your voice. Make us understand why we absolutely need this product! Smiling while you read can help your delivery sound more genuine. I appreciate your composure when you encountered a small hiccup in your performance. Remember, mishaps are common in the recording booth, so don't let them throw you off. Taking diaphragmatic breaths and using a Reactive Breath to reset is a great technique. Slightly slowing down your pace could also help. Continue working on your articulation, and you'll make great progress. I'm looking forward to witnessing your growth in future performances!