I got shivers when you said "no one will call on you", then you went back to a happy tone and for a second I thought I was gaslighting myself. I feel like it would be cool to hear you do the monologue in a creepy voice. Overall it was a pretty good take though, not too many stutters even though it's so long. You held a consistent voice/tone pretty well throughout the whole thing. We love it!~

There were some issues with articulation and enunciation in words, like the word “risk” sounding like “rish”. The word “professional” was also cut off so just be mindful of those things as you do auditions and future homeworks. I’d like to hear you project more. Remember to visualize yourself in a gym full of people and you want everyone to hear you without a microphone.