Hey there, this was a great recording so I wanted to peer review this if that's cool with you! I have a few things but totally feel free to throw them out if nothing vibes with you. - I love your voice, it echos Carlin with a bit of that gruffness but is still smooth to listen to. Great balance with vocal quality! - You have the speed I wanted to achieve in my own recording. This makes it a lot funnier (in my opinion). - With that speed, the enunciation wasn't as forward as I think it might have been able to, There were a couple of very minor stutters over a couple of words and I just wanted to hear those consonants pop a little more. - I think I heard a little background noise but nothing major. Overall, great recording, friend! Can't wait to hear more from you!

You were speeding through the script and lost the clarity in your words, causing them to mesh together and become hard to understand. It sounds more like you were quickly reading through the script to get it done rather than bringing out the emotions and performing the scene itself. Try to project your voice louder, as this may help with making the words sound more clear.