I had inflamed sinuses while I recorded mine so I feel you there. You really sound like you could be adverting for some medication!

You did well even with you being sick! I liked the way you emphasized key words and sometimes would draw out a word to give it a unique, energetic fill. Remember to speak each word clearly and not slur words together, pronouncing every syllable and letter in the word from start to finish. You have a friendly, engaging tone and it fits well with this sort of script and scenario.