great pacing! and articulation

Started out pretty good, but you started to slow down at 2:10 and get quieter. Sounded as if you were just reading the descriptors of the free gift instead of flaunting them. Remember, if you stumble, you can just redo that part of the line in the same take. But you can also do it later and replace the sections that aren't as you like them.

Let's kick up the excitement a notch! These pencil sharpeners are seriously cool, right? When you're recording, channel that enthusiasm and make it sound like you're genuinely excited about them. And don't forget to project like you're in a giant gym with no mic - we want everyone to hear you loud and clear. Variety is the spice of life, and it's true for voice-overs too. While clarity is crucial, let's not sacrifice the natural flow of the delivery. Keep it engaging and interesting, like you're telling a great story. And keep working on those breathing exercises; they'll help you maintain that energy throughout your delivery. You're on the right track!