Love the volume and enthusiasm!

You sound like you’re more focused on articulating and saying the words correctly, which takes away from your performance. You sound like you’re reading the script, rather than speaking to people. While articulation is important, it shouldn't come at the cost of sounding natural and engaging. It's all about finding that sweet spot where clarity meets a conversational tone. You don’t want to go too slow as that can cause your audience to lose interest quickly. Speeding up the delivery and visualizing the scenario is a great tip. It can help you sound more spontaneous and connected with your audience. And I'm glad to hear that projection is on point. Keep up the good work, and remember, it's all about finding that balance between clarity and a natural, flowing delivery.