Wow! Nice job, your projection and articulation both sound very good to me!

Pretty good. I would say that when you go to edit this (if you were to edit this), you may want to remove the pause after "garden hose" so that the "in a genuine imitation leather style carrying case with authentic vinyl trim" ends up being the peak of your build up with that sentence, before you come back down with the next to finish the advertisement. (Timestamp 1:50 and on)

My advice would be slowing it down a bit at the beginning. It not only helps you pronounce words clearly but also keeps you from running out of breath too quickly. And hey, projecting your voice from your diaphragm instead of your throat can really make your delivery strong. Tongue twisters are a fantastic practice tool for sharpening articulation and word clarity. They can be a valuable addition to your vocal exercises. When it comes to varying your delivery, changing the cadence, pauses, and inflections can make your performance more engaging. Furthermore, tapping into the appropriate emotions while reading can help your audience connect with the material on a deeper level, enhancing the overall impact of your voice-over. Right now, it doesn't sound like you're really not that interested in this product. Still, you did very well these are just techniques will undoubtedly contribute to a more polished and captivating delivery.