First thing I noticed is you forgot to say “value” in the beginning. Just remember to be as accurate as possible. Every word matters, so being precise is crucial to effective communication. Taking those deep breaths is a great practice, but it's equally important to maintain a steady pace to ensure clarity. Staying composed and confident, even when stumbling over words, is a valuable skill. It allows you to continue the delivery smoothly. And yes, projecting your voice, as if you're addressing a large room without a microphone, can significantly enhance your presence and reach when speaking. Keep up the good work and keep refining these aspects to further improve your delivery.