Wonderful energy, very much going for the sale. I did notice that a lot of the words did seem to smush together, but that might have just been from the volume.

I definitely felt like you were talking to a gymnasium of people, you have a lot of power in your voice!

You're moving in the right direction with your voice projection. This added energy enhances your overall delivery. Keep practicing those deep breaths using your diaphragm and try to find natural pauses in your sentences and phrases. These small breaks can be a great opportunity to take a full breath and maintain your breath control effectively. Additionally, don't forget to continue your breathing exercises; consistency here can work wonders. Regarding pronunciation and articulation, it's important to strike a balance between pace and clarity. As you refine your skills, remember that it's okay to take your time in certain parts of your delivery to ensure that every word is clear and well-articulated. These nuances will come with practice, so keep at it!