Hey Melanie. Thanks so much for submitting this. Love your little twist of arrogance that comes out in this character. I can't wait to show you what you can do with that side. This is much like many of the submissions - very theatrical, and while that's good, the industry likes a combination of theatre meets film - less is more. More variety - not ramping through the copy in one speed and one emotion - etc. So it's a matter of developing more to react to - so it isn't just a one person dialogue but rather reacting and involving who you are talking to in the scene. We will work on different paces, different tones, textures, speeds, storylines, reactions etc. Which is all what we are about to teach. Look forward to your journey