Wow after listening to a bunch of you guys i feel like my take has zero personality! And I am a pretty eccentric person irl 😅

Try projecting your voice so that you get more volume in your delivery. projection is indeed a critical aspect of voice-over work. To project effectively, imagine that you're speaking to an audience in a larger space, like a theater. This mental exercise can help you naturally increase your volume, ensuring that your voice carries clearly without sounding strained. I could hear you taking some micro breaths and losing your breath so you want to take deeper breaths using your diaphragm. Breathing techniques are paramount for maintaining vocal stamina and control. Utilizing your diaphragm for deeper breaths allows you to sustain your voice throughout longer phrases without running out of breath. Practicing breathing exercises regularly can help build this skill. Furthermore, varying your inflections is an excellent way to keep your delivery engaging and prevent it from sounding monotonous. So try changing up your inflections at the end of words/phrases so that they don’t sound the exact same.