hey Vstorian - i like this characters strength - he is a business man and I love that - but there isn't much story/journey in here - so it's going to be about finding moments to be reactive, to change up emotions etc. You have some nice intimate confidence in you - once we get you feeling storyline - vs reading words - you will have different speeds, emotions, tones, textures etc throughout. So I can't wait to hear your growth.