I loved this!! I could really feel your emotions in this it felt like I was really seeing this argument play out

Hey MollyMauk - thank you so much for giving up so much emotion - like many talent - this is just a bit more theatrical than it needs to be - don't get me wrong - it's really genuine and passionate - I can tell you're really trying to feel this story - but it's pushed (like theatre) and this industry likes a mix of film and theatre. Less is more. If you took all your same choices and made it a more intimate conversation and less desperate to show - it would be a fantastic scene. You're not afraid to let go and emote which is great. But this guy comes across as whiny and desperate - After you say I FEEL SORRY FOR YOU - on that exact line - that's when I like you the most. Then you go back to the desperate. It's good but desperate doesn't sell as well as confidence - there is a fine line here - love your raw emotions though - thanks for going there