I really like the emotional range the character goes through here! It does feel like the pacing is a bit too steady though. Like the space between each pause is too even. Otherwise, loved the read.

LOL on oprah - thanks so much Flawlessice - great to hear your passion - feels a bit forced - i love the emotion as I can tell you are really letting go and I LOVE that - but it feels over breathy and forced in a big way and leans more on a theatrical read - i love your pace change and when your voice cracks - you give me raw and I love that - so dont change that - but want to teach you to use all this passion and emotion in a less is more approach - you will grow greatly - can't wait to hear your changes, but thanks for going for it