Wow... this was fantastic to listen to! I think your voice fit this perfectly, and the emotion in the latter half felt so real. The only thing I think could be better would be the pauses in between lines in the first half, as they felt a little unnatural to me, but other than that I loved listening to this!

Hey Delvin - thank you so much for submitting. Love your tone - so much depth - I feel like there is lots of strength in your depth - especially for video game characters. However for something like this - a bit more intimate and not as projected will come across stronger - I feel like you've made some good interesting choices and your desperation and passion is transparent, but to have you be a bit more casual in this and not as projected will be more what they want now - this is more theatrical - and will have a time and place - it sounds like you made these great choices and showed them to me - and felt them - but I feel like you just pushed them a bit too hard