Hey this was a pretty good audition! You definitely have the tone for Mona (especially at the beginning) and I did enjoy listening to this. I do have some notes however, for starters I would love it if there was a little more enthusiasm in Mona's speech. Example, there are moments where she would sound excited and giddy at her exclamation points. Also for the imitating Wario part, it's a start. However, I would love it if you actually did your best impression of Wario at that moment, and when you get to the ha ha ha part, actually laugh like Wario and it shouldn't sound like you just saying ha ha ha. In shorter words, picture yourself in this situation as Mona, you want to go full out imitating him, not just a minor imitation. If you put those things into account, then your audition will be even better! I'll put you on hold for the role for now, it is recommended that you do a retake similar to what one of the auditions for Young Cricket did cause that shows me how well you can take notes and it can increase your chances for the role. This was really good so far! Well done!
Hii, thank you so much for your feedback! I was a bit scared about the tone, so it's good to know that it fits! Also, I'll do a retake later today, improving those aspects such as the enthusiasm, the Wario impression and Mona's cheerful personality! Once again, thank so much for your feedback and for this opportunity!
