Astralon - Fall of Order
ryucotsa for Rayden, the Adventurer
The first two lines are just to get you in to the character's voice.To avoid dozens of lines, I grouped the important "shouts" to interrupt your opponent in debates in line 3. Rayden is a rather normal fellow, more often than not a little jokester, but if someone insults or hurts him or his friends, he's going to retaliate.
His voice is medium, no accent is necessary, but if you think you can give the character more "charm" with a fitting accent, feel free to try!
(Disappointed) Wait what? So, you're saying... you're human. But you're also a cat? That's gotta be the lamest transformation choice you could've made! What about a dragon?! (Referring to "Cheyll", a cat that switches to a human form at will)
(Serious) Chaos, Order, what does it matter? If you're killing off innocent people to reach your goal, you'll have to go through me first!
(Refute Argument)
That can't be right!
None of that is true!
That's not what happened!
There's just no way!
I can see the truth!(Consent)
Wait, that's it!
I agree with that!
That must be it!
You're right!(Doubt)
I don't think so!
This doesn't seem right!
Hang on a second!
Hold it right there!
Hey there! While I like the audition overall, I feel like you're lacking a lot of power behind your words, especially for the shouted lines. It sounds like you're merely talking, when it's meant to cut your opponent off in a heated debate.
Also, I clicked that "Add comment" button too quickly. I'll get back to you once we get a lil' bit closer to the deadline. Have a wonderful day!
Would you likeva reread? I might have gone a little to Dangonroppa, and not enough Ace Attorney
That's not true. There's nothing wrong with Danganronpa, in fact, it's exactly what I'm looking for, hence the video for reference above. But those all have a lot of force and/or emotion behind them. Danganronpa 1 was a bit worse in that aspect, that's why I'm focussing on the one of the two with better voice acting. (: As for everyone, feel free to try again! My e-mail is [email protected] . Good day!