Great job on tackling this challenging script! Remember, whenever you make a mistake, take a deep breath, reset, and try again. It's essential to maintain composure and not rush through the lines. Now, let's focus on your articulation. Take your time and really pronounce each and every sound clearly. Practice the exercises we discussed in class, as they can be incredibly helpful in improving your articulation. Keep in mind that articulation is a crucial aspect of voice acting, so the more you practice, the better you'll become! Next, let's talk about energy. I'd love to hear more passion and enthusiasm in your delivery. Bring the script to life by infusing it with energy and emotion. Imagine yourself in the moment, and let that excitement and passion shine through your voice. Overall, I see great potential in you! Keep working on your articulation and adding more energy to your performances. Practice regularly, and I'm sure you'll see significant improvement in no time. I would also like you to start reading outload every day for about 15 mins. This will help you with future scripts and will also help you with your cold reading skills.