Hey evan....love that opening - love that i would know what to draw by your efforts and that they were WITH the words not just before and after. Love that the characters are completely different - different ages and personalities - so love that. Remember to keep one faster than the other so that adds more layers. You had some really nice moments with the characters. Loved that intimate "I was just wondering" wasn't predictable there so love when you surprise me and take me somewhere else. If you were to audition two characters like this - make sure in the editing to layer them more. For example they can talk over each other, interupt each other etc. Instead of Line - beat, line beat. Most common at this stage but a great Advanced technique to add to your auditions in the future. GOOD CHARACTERS here lots to work with