Ahh I loved your take on this, James! I especially love your Firefighter Sam! Hahaha it's very easy to tell what kind of character he is! Makes me rethink my whole take! Also I was totally gonna do a french accent for "Later that day" too originally hahahahaa

Hey James - great slate - good work. so fun and simple. LOVED the struggles and efforts you put into your characters _ BOTH OF THEM - great work. Yes these embelishments are STRONGLY encouraged. The only thing you want to watch for is to not over due any one character trait. Loved that Sam was nervous and insecure and you used your breath to create the scene. Loved that the characters had dynamics - quieter, louder, to self, sarcasm, humour, reax etc. LOVED YOUR WORK HERE. The only thing you could do is edit in a couple spots of them interupting each other -LOVED YOUR TAG (THE END). I loved this - THIS IS HOW YOU NAIL AN AUDITION - so YES keep those embelishments up - so much more powerful than adding music/sfx - make them with your voice and bring them into the scene and behind the words. GREAT WORK