Love that you're having some fun - grabbed my attention on the slate too - lol - I loved sam's voice and personality. Loved that you worked to give two different personalities for Casey as well - so good job there but they speak the same paces so that's what you'd want to layer up a bit more. Casey is almost slower but not quite so close. I loved that you were putting in some efforts. I would add even more efforts - feed the animator. One thing to do when you are voicing two characters is to layer them closer together at times. They can interupt each other, the can talk over each other etc, and that would make the scene move more. Right now the scene moves slow - so making one much faster would have helped for sure, but it's Line, then pause, line then pause so it has a steady predictable pace. Kids have very small attention spans so this scene just needs to pick up more in SOME places. Great to hear your growth - you're starting to take some risks and I'm so proud of you - more more more