You did well in maintaining a steady pace and clear articulation throughout the read. Good job on recovering on those small hiccups However, to make the performance more versatile and engaging, it's important to explore different tones and emotions that match the content of the script. When portraying Peter's moments of depression, try adjusting your tone to reflect the somber and low-spirited emotions. Slow down slightly and allow your voice to convey a sense of melancholy or sadness. This will help create a more authentic and relatable depiction of Peter's emotional state. On the other hand, when Peter is depicted as being extremely excited, it's essential to bring that energy and enthusiasm to your voice. Increase the pace slightly, infuse your delivery with a vibrant tone, and let your excitement shine through. This will help captivate the listeners and convey the joy and enthusiasm that Peter is experiencing. Remember to think about the character, their emotions, and the overall context of the script. Visualize the scene and immerse yourself in the storytelling process. By incorporating these adjustments in tone and energy, you'll be able to create a more dynamic and engaging voice-over performance. Another thing I would like you to focus on is just making this read feel more natural, I know for homework we wanted you to over articulate but always remember to never sound like your reading script. Continue to explore different emotions and experiment with varying your delivery style to bring the characters and their experiences to life. With practice and experimentation, you'll develop a versatile range and enhance your ability to connect with the audience on a deeper level.