Also it's the PTD Script

You did a great job differentiating the PTDs (plosives, fricatives, and affricates) in the script. It's important to continue practicing and refining your pronunciation skills to maintain consistency. Regarding pacing, there were moments where it felt a bit slow. Try to find a balance between a steady pace and maintaining the natural flow of the script. Experiment with different speeds and practice reading the script aloud to find a rhythm that feels comfortable and engaging. Your voice has a pleasant tone, especially when you use it effectively. However, there was a tendency to end thoughts or phrases in a weak glottal fry. This can be an indicator of weak breath support. To address this, focus on strengthening your breath control and capacity through dedicated exercises and daily practice. With time and effort, you'll be able to develop a more confident and consistent vocal delivery. Remember that breath support is crucial in voice-over work. Take the time to practice exercises that specifically target breath control and support. This will help you maintain consistent energy and vocal quality throughout your performances. Keep up the good work and continue to invest time and effort into honing your skills. With practice, your breath support will improve, leading to more dynamic and engaging voice-over performances.