Your projection in this read is very strong without being excessive. I enjoyed that the tone you used was very natural, somewhere between storyteller and conversational. I do think your "T"s and "D"s sounded pretty identical, particularly in the middles of words. For example, the "T" in "Peter" and the "dd" in "Padderton" sound the same (though the "t" in "padderTON" was distinct." In a real script or audiobook, I would pronounce it exactly the same way you are, but for an articulation exercise, you might consider differentiating the T's more intentionally regardless of how you would actually pronounce it in a job. All that being said, your read was very pleasant to listen to =]