really enjoyed your take! I legitimately laughed when you said that's me by the way HA ha, like your pulled the rug from under us. I don't think I noticed any pronunciation mistakes. GREAT JOB!

I’d like you to make up a scenario in your mind and imagine it as if you were doing any sort of script. Who are you, why are you saying this, where are you, who are you speaking to, and how are you feeling as you say this? Think about these and what you want us to feel when listening back. Your tone seemed to stay in a pattern most of the time, so I want you to really play around with adding some life and variety to your delivery.