I can't believe you kept the accent going the whole way through! Very amazing work to keep and hold that. I also liked the timing and how you changed our tone as you read, it felt very natural! My constructive feedback would be to slow down 25%. Because this was a tongue twister it was already hard to understand each word, but with the accent sometimes parsing the clusters of consonants were a bit difficult to pick up. When you said "Our growing group..." that was a really great speed as you kept the accent and tone but the words were a bit more spaced. Amazing work, you could absolutely voice a professional vampire!

I absolutely loved the vampire character you brought to life! It was so cool and entertaining, and those ad libs you threw in really added a unique touch to the delivery. Great job on making it fun and engaging to listen to! Now, when it comes to the technical side, remember to keep your clarity in check. Make sure to articulate and enunciate your words clearly, so that each and every word is easily understood by the listener. Taking a little extra time to pronounce each word accurately, especially for characters with distinctive voices or accents, will make your performance even more impressive. Another thing to keep in mind is your breath control. Try taking bigger breaths to support your delivery and maintain consistent energy throughout the read. It'll help you avoid running out of breath at certain points and ensure a smooth and confident delivery. Overall, you're doing an awesome job!