Take bigger, deeper breaths so that you are able to push your voice out to project more. Also think about how you want your audience to feel when listening to your read. It seemed to be lacking energy throughout the read. In terms of energy, it's important to understand the purpose of your read and what emotions you want to evoke in your audience. Think about the story you're telling and the message you're conveying. Once you have a clear understanding of these factors, you can start to experiment with your delivery and find the right balance of energy, emotion, and tone to bring your script to life. It's only been one week but dive more deeper into this in the coming the weeks. Still good job