Loved this take, very clearly understandable, I really want that pencil sharpner now !!

You've got a great voice! Just a couple of things to think about - it feels like we're missing the vibe of the setting in your delivery. The scene is in a bustling gym, filled with all sorts of people, so we've got to hit the back of the room with our voice. Imagine trying to catch the attention of that person in the very last row, doing their crunches. Remember, gyms are lively, buzzing with energy! So, we need to match that spirit, don't hold back, be dynamic. And it's not just about information, it's about inspiration too. We're there to fire up people, get them pumped. So, really embrace that enthusiastic spirit. Now, while we're all about enthusiasm and energy, we can't forget about articulation. We're trying to inspire, but if people can't catch what we're saying, we'll lose them. So, let's make sure every word is clear and sharp. Here's a little tip that might help - try embodying the setting physically. I mean, stand up, maybe even move around a little, use your hands. Just like you're actually there, cheering everyone on. It's a bit like method acting, you know? It can give an authentic touch to the performance.