You have a wonderful voice for commercials!! Nice and clear with your pronunciation too!!

Good job on projection that's the main thing we are looking in this script. You have fun, bubbly voice that help push this item. Now one of the main things I'm noticing is your breathes. Keep up with your doggy pants and tongue twisters to help build up that breath support so you get used to doing longer reads like this. Doggy pants and tongue twisters are great exercises to help build up your breath support and improve your overall vocal stamina. Practice these exercises regularly to help you feel more comfortable with longer reads. Make sure to always double read your scripts you said "no entry fee" instead of "no entrée fee" they look similar but there different. Always make sure you're reading what's in the script. Still very good job SOLID PERFORMANCE