Hey Sean - its' deb on the wrong account lol thank you so much for taking time to listen to your peers. Good work. I love your bright slate - but don't feel you need to say READING FOR....just say your first and last name and that beautifully approachable and friendly HI - and that's all you need my friend. Nicely done. Loved your opening growl...really brought me in . You are just yelling a bit too much with this character, you did break the yelling for a brief moment but it sounds like AUTHUR GODFREY and he kind of yells when he talks, having a bit more dynamics for this scene would have really made a nice balance, but loved what you added. Good work. Loved your fear in the opening of fear. The opening of each of your sentences feel the same so just watch that patterning. You did break that up for the second half of it though so good work there. This is directable and has some great potential FEAR is where I LOVE YOU HERE - you have this fun (almost annoying) character in you that is FANTASTIC for character work. Loved all the extras you added here, I felt the scene, and the emotion. This was my favorite by far. Great potential here.