You have a wonderful strong voice. I enjoyed the pronunciation from your words and I especially liked your disgust one.

Hey Khalmir - its' deb on the wrong account lol thank you so much for putting in so much efforts. I didn't like your first line - it sounded a bit contribed, but then you started adding more organic emotions in the lines that followed. Loved that you played with a bit of a characterization on the one line but it breaks character so not sure why the character suddenly changes, so while I love the risk and that you're playing here, make sure it has purpose. Love the opening of fear until you go into the character *but loved the read on it for you. Loved the sigh on the end and delivery on "Might even be worse than the disease itself. Loved that - you need more of that - felt so nice and real. You kind of go in and out of real and read-ee - Which tells me you are GROWING - love that. You will likely need private training as well to keep working on your acting and get you away from sounding like you're reading, but there were some really nice moments of real in here - and for you that is the MOST important thing to work on - sounding organic in your choices. Love to hear you playing around like this .......I am not listening with the right speakers to give you a proper critique on editing but from my computer speakers - I wouldn't have known it was different takes. THANK YOU FOR TAKING SOME RISKS. that is fantastic - even if they aren't the right risks, just being willing to try is A++ in my books