Astralon - Fall of Order
starkcontrast for Rayden, the Adventurer
The first two lines are just to get you in to the character's voice.To avoid dozens of lines, I grouped the important "shouts" to interrupt your opponent in debates in line 3. Rayden is a rather normal fellow, more often than not a little jokester, but if someone insults or hurts him or his friends, he's going to retaliate.
His voice is medium, no accent is necessary, but if you think you can give the character more "charm" with a fitting accent, feel free to try!
(Disappointed) Wait what? So, you're saying... you're human. But you're also a cat? That's gotta be the lamest transformation choice you could've made! What about a dragon?! (Referring to "Cheyll", a cat that switches to a human form at will)
(Serious) Chaos, Order, what does it matter? If you're killing off innocent people to reach your goal, you'll have to go through me first!
(Refute Argument)
That can't be right!
None of that is true!
That's not what happened!
There's just no way!
I can see the truth!(Consent)
Wait, that's it!
I agree with that!
That must be it!
You're right!(Doubt)
I don't think so!
This doesn't seem right!
Hang on a second!
Hold it right there!
Good day! Overall, it was a good audition, but you do lack emotion, especially with the first two lines. My main issue however is something more major though, it's that you sound a little too old for the role, to be honest. If you're able to re-record it higher, feel free to send me an e-mail to [email protected] . Thanks for your audition, have a wonderful day!
Hey! Thanks for the feedback. I can give it another try later today if that's alright?
I'm terribly sorry for missing this reply. But yes, feel free to give it another shot! As I've said before, I'd hate to reject anyone before I've heard them at their full potential. (:
Sorry this is a tad late, but I still have time to re-audition I believe, right? If so, would it be better to email it to you or upload it here?
Either way is fine.