hey Joey - thank you so much for making sure I saw this. You have a ton of passion in this piece which is great and you didn't stay in the same anger/aggression all the way through - which is great - that is an important part of it. I think overall he sounds angry - even when he's being sad, so I would change that constant ANGER in his voice or frustration. I know he's frustrated - I get it - but he can have warm moments as well to balance that out. you had a slight moment of tears which was great - you didn't over due it. So a nice base to work with here - just needs some slight direction to suit the emotional changes you offered, but AT LEAST YOU OFFERED THEM. Good efforts here - very dramatic piece....