Dissidia Duodecim 012
Nyx Stardust for Kefka Palazzo
Kefka looks like jester and acts like one to lighten the mood at times and for some fun. But behind that persona is a man who wishes for nothing more but pure destruction to the whole world. He's certainly quite the psychopath.
Voice: very lively and quite a jokester whenever he's not going crazy. When he is going crazy he's very loud and can go borderline apeshit.
"Hopes aren't worth dirt! I'm going to destroy... EVERYTHING!!!"
"THIS IS FILLING ME UP!!!"
"Meaning, schemeaning! The whole world's going bye bye, you included! Life... dreams... hope.... where do they come from? And where do they go...? None of that junk is enough to fulfill your hearts!!!"
Take reading the lines a little bit slower. Also if you can try sounding louder and little more insane for the first two lines. The same applies to the third line but you add the loud and insane part after "where do they come from... and where do they go...?" For the first part of that line he sounds rather somber and then he goes back to losing his shit. Other than that the voice you gave didn't sound that bad!
I appreciate the feedback, I'll do another submission with what you said.