Romantic College Student Novel
mippa for Girlfriend
Shay and James have a very flirty relationship. Every time they talk to each they have a bit of a tangy sound to their voice.
Hey there, babe. I thought maybe you would want to hear my voice, to cheer yourself up.
I miss you, you handsome devil. Are you excited to see me in April?
Thank you for the wonderful pictures you sent me. I loved looking at every single one of them. Your video was super romantic! I can't wait to see you.
Have a good night, my little ray of sunshine you.
I love you.
Shay.
Hi, mippa! The voice fits well to the character, but the intonation is a little off. We're looking for a more fluid reading - and more natural, less like an audiobook and more like an actual relaxed conversation. Other than the "handsome devil" part, the rest can sound more 'sweet'. Let me know if that makes sense!
Total sense! Is this a letter being read, a voice mail? A little context would go a long way!
This is a voicemail! The the boyfriend has never heard the girlfriend's voice, since they met online, and the girlfriend wants to be very gentle and sweet when she's talking! A very natural flow.