Hey Prosty - nice job I like that you're not losing it right in the beginning....you get a bit more frustrated as it went on. I would like to have had you allow for this person to react to you in parts so it didn't continue in such a steady pace - but you had some nice emotions in here and I like you're genuine. It just needs more storyline/dynamics, so that it's not so steady but love where your character is for the most part. Nice base to work with here. So imagine them talking back once in a while and incorporate that into your scene by the way you react with your lines - then it will be that much more connected to a real story